A PHOTOGRAPH YOU LIKE
snow fox
The photograph was
taken by me, the history of this picture beging when I wake up in the morning
and my daughter tell me that she has a costume birthday.
I had spent the all morning looking for a fox costume for
my daugther, because she wanted to disguise herself as a fox , after going to 3
costume's shops, I finally found one of her size, it was beatiful, just what
she needed.
So I started my way back to my daugther's mother's house, and when I finally arrived, she told
me she had made a mistake and that the costume party was not for that week, it
was for the next one, I was really dissapointed since I have been looking for
that costume for hours, and on top of that our daugther was really looking forward to using her new fox costume, and when she noticed she wouldn't be able to use her
costume for a whole week, she started feeling sad.
So we decided to do something to cheer us up, and my
daugther's mother came with the idea of going to the mountain so we could play
with the snow.
And that´s how
my daugther, who really wanted to use her new costume, became a snow fox.
I like this pictore because i never thought that day would end up playing with
my daughter in the snow.

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